Feedback of our Initial Ideas Presentation

Feedback we received for our presentation:

• Make it clear that our track was of the pop genre.
• Discuss and think more about the audience and what would interest them.
• Add another video of the same genre and look at the style and conventions to further our research.
• Add more analysis of camera work, mis-en-scene etc of other videos of the same genre.
• It was a good idea to look at videos from the same artist.
• We used good still images from the videos to show what we were discussing.
• Looked clearly at the micro-areas and casting.

We learned from this feedback where we needed to improve and we added the work we needed based on the comments we received.