Friday, 14 October 2011

Narrative Final Ideas

The fragmented narrative goes as follows (to be editted into sections through the editting process):

1. We see the present time where "the wife" walks into the club, "the husband" at the bar drinking heavily flirting with the barmaid. "the wife" goes on stage and starts singing song "times up", "husband" looks dumb struck and screws up photograph of "the husband" and "the wife" from happier time.

2. Then we go to flashback of happier time in the pub.

3. Then we go to slight past/present of the house where "the wife" goes to serve up a meal to her "husband" but he blanks her carries on drinking and makes her get out of the way of the television. "The wife" gets angry and packs a bag and leaves.

4. "The wife" leaves the house with bag. Getting angry in the street she kicks the bag aside and walks off down the street.

5. She then walks out across a field.

6. The lyrics end and "the wife" leaves the stage.

7. She walks away in field.

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